Feedback.

I shown my video to a group of students, in order to see whether it would be successful to a wider audience, and to test whether it had the effect which I wanted it to give. I aksed an equal amount of males and females for feedback, as my film was aimed at both sexes.
Katie Kenny:

Rose Williams: I wanted the video to continue to see what happened. I like the use of music especailly the piece used when the characters were choosing wha5
t to wear. I also like the split screen when they were choosing what to wear. I thought the script was good and the was too. I thought that the characters could have been introduced slightly better so that we knew more about them.

Stephen Rigby: The storyline seems enticing and would definately make me want to watch it all the way through. It links and refers to our students hectic lifestyle which has its twists, I would love to watch this full film.

Joel Durkin: I liked the video because it followed a clear narrative. The characters, especially the boys were very realistic and the music fitted in well because it seemed like the sort of music that the characters would like. i think that the settings were effective because they helped to reflect the characters personalities.