This is my prelim and I now know from making it that I will need to improve many things during my actual piece. For example the text on this isnt very interesting, it doesnt stand out and the clarity of it isnt good. Also the picture I used isnt very good and it has quite a few things wrong with it such as the shadow of her. The contents page also looks quite boring as it doesnt have much colour in it.

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